I want to make some very simple monster. I made a pit of tentacles and I don't like it. So there are two ways ahead: to improve tentacles pit, or to make another monster.
Instead of it just being a pit why not have the tentacles move up and down so you would need to time you jumps. That way you could also put them on the ceiling for a second rape animation.
Or put the ghosts back in but this time they possess you and force you to climb into the pits.
Well, what did you have in mind for the tentacle pit? Improving it could be what the first comment had said and putting them on the walls. As for another monster uhhh, you could still do the pit, but do the parasite idea if you don't want to change much or leeches that drop down from the ceiling. They can land down on Allie on her back and suck her blood out. They would be larger in size to drink it quickly with only one attacking. Again another gory way could be it falling from the ceiling and falling into her mouth draining her from the inside out and her not being able to stop it. Just another idea and opinion.
i like the idea for the succubus from the true succubus i suggest 3 rape sequence for her.
this is the scenes.
What about a Succubus that blows hearts to Allie, if she is hit by it she becomes brainwashed and the Succubus;
2. A sexual victim till she dies or cums and her soul is drained into the Succubus. 6. Kisses the Succubus and mindlessly pledges to serves her mistress forever. Finally 7. Is raped till Allie herself becomes a Succubus and attacks other girls.
thar is my suggestions this will make good scenes in your game^^
I'll do a succubus monster in the 4th chapter. 4th chapter will be full of fire and lost souls, just like in hell. Succubus is a good character for the 4th chapter.
there's always room for tentacles. i vote for improving them.
the best idea i've seen so far out of these comments is the wall/parasite idea.
have the tentacles in pits on the floor, ceiling, and walls, make it so that you have to time your movements carefully or else they'll grab you.
toss in some kind of parasite as well, that the tentacles can toss into the safe spots to force you to keep moving, and you have yourself a recipe for something quite awesome.
finally, if you're feeling bold enough, you could up the ante and make it so that all the tentacles are tied into a larger tentacle monster that serves as a boss or something.
I say modify the tentacles, lets keep with this harsh punishment theme, maybe the tentacles once they get firm hold of the protagonist infest them and turn them into more tentacles. Not killing them but giving them an all consuming hunger for the next girl to infest.
Instead of it just being a pit why not have the tentacles move up and down so you would need to time you jumps. That way you could also put them on the ceiling for a second rape animation.
ReplyDeleteOr put the ghosts back in but this time they possess you and force you to climb into the pits.
tentacles...why don't you use another plant?
ReplyDeleteput it on the walls?
ReplyDeletemake it reach up every now and then
ReplyDeleteTheres to many rape animations, how about something a little more simple this time, maybe a monster or machine that decapitates or eviscerates Allie.
ReplyDeleteWell, what did you have in mind for the tentacle pit? Improving it could be what the first comment had said and putting them on the walls. As for another monster uhhh, you could still do the pit, but do the parasite idea if you don't want to change much or leeches that drop down from the ceiling. They can land down on Allie on her back and suck her blood out. They would be larger in size to drink it quickly with only one attacking. Again another gory way could be it falling from the ceiling and falling into her mouth draining her from the inside out and her not being able to stop it. Just another idea and opinion.
ReplyDeleteLeeches! Leeches falling from the ceiling! That's what I want! Thank you!
Deleteleeches falling from the ceiling its a good idea..... they can be sexual leeches?
DeleteThe more rape animations the better
ReplyDeleteYou don't have any tentacle animations yet, so it could be interesting, so I'd say: try to improve it.
The more variety the better!
and the more rape animations, the better too! :)
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ReplyDeletei like the idea for the succubus from the true succubus i suggest 3 rape sequence for her.
ReplyDeletethis is the scenes.
What about a Succubus that blows hearts to Allie, if she is hit by it she becomes brainwashed and the Succubus;
2. A sexual victim till she dies or cums and her soul is drained into the Succubus.
6. Kisses the Succubus and mindlessly pledges to serves her mistress forever.
Finally 7. Is raped till Allie herself becomes a Succubus and attacks other girls.
thar is my suggestions this will make good scenes in your game^^
I'll do a succubus monster in the 4th chapter. 4th chapter will be full of fire and lost souls, just like in hell. Succubus is a good character for the 4th chapter.
DeleteI agree with improving the tentacles, but then again thats my kinda thing too. x]
ReplyDeleteCould just make it a little simpler? Maybe a deeper pit with two or three tentacles in, could grab Allie if she falls down and crush her.
ReplyDeletePersonally while I love this, I wouldn't mind seeing a good through rape/sex scene. This seems to be a good opportunity.
ReplyDeletethere's always room for tentacles. i vote for improving them.
ReplyDeletethe best idea i've seen so far out of these comments is the wall/parasite idea.
have the tentacles in pits on the floor, ceiling, and walls, make it so that you have to time your movements carefully or else they'll grab you.
toss in some kind of parasite as well, that the tentacles can toss into the safe spots to force you to keep moving, and you have yourself a recipe for something quite awesome.
finally, if you're feeling bold enough, you could up the ante and make it so that all the tentacles are tied into a larger tentacle monster that serves as a boss or something.
I say modify the tentacles, lets keep with this harsh punishment theme, maybe the tentacles once they get firm hold of the protagonist infest them and turn them into more tentacles. Not killing them but giving them an all consuming hunger for the next girl to infest.
ReplyDeleteMaybe u can use my flying shellfish or medusa idea if u think u want to change. I think ur tentacle pit idea is good though
ReplyDeleteI like the flying shellfish idea. I'll do it later.
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